That is a very cute story. It is only too bad your two protagonists don’t feel more comfortable expressing their love in public, but I guess some people are like that.
It is too bad that they don't feel more comfortable about it. I really wanted the best for them, but I felt that if I tried to have them make their feelings known to all, that it would be so out of character for them.
It was really hard to write this as a secret relationship, though. Considering how bittersweet it is, but I honestly don't think much of the world would approve such a relationship. I know I would, but I'm simply one person!
[Spoilers: She really doesn't ship this... stupid curse.
Double spoilers: Though if this relationship were to ever occur, she would indeed support them!]
[ he's all smiles as he moves to respond in kind. If she's brave enough to publicly claim her story, then he can be brave enough to admit he read it admire it. ]
It is a story you can be proud of, however... [ how to put this delicately... ] Did you mean to make it a story between two men? [ he's from the victorian age, such stories (as far as he knows) does not exist! ]
[Doesn't know how to respond to this. When put that way, it kind of 'wakes her up a little', so to speak. Because in her little pure and innocent world, never would she think this either, nor write this.]
Does it really matter, it's love.
[She will dodge this question using that an an answer. Thinking about it any further makes her head hurt.]
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I have no concrit!
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Ooooh! You should do a H/C fic next with them- I think it would be really cute!
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That does sound like a good idea, especially with those two. I will keep that in mind for when I write my next story! Ｏ(≧∇≦)Ｏ
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It is too bad that they don't feel more comfortable about it. I really wanted the best for them, but I felt that if I tried to have them make their feelings known to all, that it would be so out of character for them.
[She wanted to write it though!]
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Secret relationships can be fun too. I think you did very well in portraying that.
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It was really hard to write this as a secret relationship, though. Considering how bittersweet it is, but I honestly don't think much of the world would approve such a relationship. I know I would, but I'm simply one person!
[Spoilers: She really doesn't ship this... stupid curse.
Double spoilers: Though if this relationship were to ever occur, she would indeed support them!]
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[She's still slightly cursed, so she doesn't quite know the implications of what she had written. All she knows is that she's proud of it!]
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[She's still cursed, forgive her.]
I thought I did very well with both of your characters.
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It is a story you can be proud of, however... [ how to put this delicately... ] Did you mean to make it a story between two men? [ he's from the victorian age, such stories (as far as he knows) does not exist! ]
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[Doesn't know how to respond to this. When put that way, it kind of 'wakes her up a little', so to speak. Because in her little pure and innocent world, never would she think this either, nor write this.]
Does it really matter, it's love.
[She will dodge this question using that an an answer. Thinking about it any further makes her head hurt.]
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[ he doesn't want to insult the lady ]
No, of course not. I apologize if I offended you. Love does conquer all. [ or so he's been told. ]
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[And then what he said...]
That is absolutely correct! Love does conquer all! If two people love each other, then it's only natural that this would be the result, am I right?
[Somewhere in the back of Estelle's mind is telling her there's indeed something wrong with this... Just she's not going to really thinking about it.]
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