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[vitaminbjorner]

Title: Charades (8/10).
Author: vitaminbjorner
Rating: Pg-13.
Fandom: Football rps (au).
Warnings: Nothing really.
Pairing(s): Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos, Fernando Torres/Olalla Dominguez.
Word count: ca 1570.
Disclaimer: “I think I made you up in my head.”
Notes: I finally got some inspiration to continue this story. I'm really sorry about the long wait, but I had

Comments

[crombieeagle872]

This chapter almost makes me despise Fernando. How he knows Sergi has this relentless undying love for him, but sort of takes advantage of that and hurts Sergi. Yeah, I understand: Olalla and Nora and Leo. But still, ya know? It's painful for Sergi. Haha, and it sucks to see Sergi hurt.

Awesome writing though.
Really.

[kissmecait17]

I am so glad that you are continuing this. I feel so horrible for Sergio here. Fernando is unbelievably selfish and it breaks my heart that Sergio can't just tell him no. It's unfair to Sergio. When he stands with his back to Fernando in the kitchen, when he can't turn around face him? *heart breaks*
I can't wait to see more. :)

[difusion]

my heart. :c

[brontok]

*shaking and crying*
Glad to see Fernando has seen the error of his ways! And Sergio's so patient and so willing to suffer for love!

[thopix]

I'm glad that you return to that story...but first I need to reread all because I don't remember it well :/

I'll try to comeback and put a real comment then ;)