Further Investigations Part II

[vivaine3]

Title: Further Investigations Part II
Author: Vivaine
Rating: PG for m/m kissing and discussion thereof
Characters: Scorpius/Albus
Summary: Scorpius and Albus discuss what they’ve seen their fathers doing.
Warnings: chanslash, m/m kissing and discussion thereof, innocent first kisses by underaged boys. STRONG WARNING: If you object in any way to

Comments

Oh, THANK YOU SO MUCH! XD

[red_rahl]

Oh, you wrote continuation fic! *adores madly*

I loved how you focused on the boys (because I do adore Al and Scorpius) and I love how they were just being total dorks to each other. The characterizations were adorable!

It's great fun how you incorporated the Japanese Wizarding school into the story! I also enjoyed how you addressed the divorce issue in this and how Scorpius had a clearer picture of why things are better the way they worked out.

The kissing was also rather adorably awkward and I gotta admit that I really loved how Harry's and Draco's reactions mirror the children's.

Just one small thing that confused me a little:
Scorpius was almost asleep when James mumbled, “Don’t know why they’d wanna do that anyway.”
Should that be Al?

But aside from that, I really, really loved this and please feel free to give me a drawbble prompt in return to writing such a wonderful story! *flails some more*

Re: Oh, THANK YOU SO MUCH! XD

[vivaine3]

*facepalm* ummm... oops?

That's what I get for posting without a beta reader. You can never catch all of these yourself. *fixes quickly* All better now.

Glad you liked it anyway ^_^ I've really enjoyed watching your artwork so I'm glad I could give back a bit. Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy!

[magical_jen]

OMG!I love love love the way you wrote your one-shot for Red Rahl picture. it was such an interesting twist to it and I just adore it. The picture made me squee in with the fluffiness, but yours made me fall off the chair and giggle with happiness. I definitely like your story best. Now I want red rahl to draw the seconds scene you have with the boys, but then you guys will get stuck in this never ending cycle of drawing pictures and writing stories and while I may enjoy that your hands will get tired so I'll just put this in my memories instead.
Cheers,
Magical_Jen

Thanks!

[vivaine3]

Thanks Jen, I appreciate the giggles - reviews are always welcome. It's hard to know sometimes whether anyone's reading these posts so I try to enjoy the writing without expecting feedback.

...stuck in this never ending cycle of drawing pictures and writing stories...

*grins* At least it would be fun! Have you seen

[iamscullysmile]

that was very funny and cute with the experimental kissing.

[alexicyn]

SQUEEEEE!!!!! So much CUTE!!!!!

I adore that the kissing led to them being rough and tumble little boys again. LOL Yeah... it will take a few years. :) Don't worry boys.

Thanks for this, this is adorable!

[vivaine3]

Thanks alexicyn. I had almost forgotten about this one. Glad you enjoyed it :D