Ive had the honor to be asked by my buddy Tyson McAdoo to write his foreword for his first book.. I'm soooooo honored and blown away. I've loved his work and we have stayed friends from the beginning.. soooo I want this to be better.. this is his work
http://www.tysonmcadoo.com/Read more... )
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Just some slight changes so that it scans a little better, dear. A suggestion: talk a bit more about how he slowly evolves from shoot to shoot, rather than just 'rolling them out, back to back'. Would make it more personal... friend of yours and all.
Good luck with it, and congrats! Published again! lol
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This: "His ability to make his girls look even more extreme and badass... with their overarching super-high-heels, two tone hair, mischievous eyes, attitudes, and fully covered in killer tattoos. "
To: He has the ability to make his models into badass glamour girls with overarching super high heels, two tone hair, mischievous eyes, sassy attitudes and killer tattoos.
Congratulations Viva !
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since the models he uses ARE badass glamour girls with overarching super high heels, two tone hair, mischievous eyes, sassy attitudes and killer tattoos - his skill is the ability to bring that into hyper reality and jump off the page.
I am not sure how to say that tho- I'm no good with words.
maybe its the loss of "look even more extreme and badass"?:
He has the ability to make his badass glamour girl models with overarching super high heels, two tone hair, mischievous eyes, sassy attitudes and killer tattoos somehow look even more extreme and badass with his use of line and color.
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I like how the people here have edited it already.
I would make it a bit longer.
Maybe talk about the fact that you were one of his illustrations and how powerful and sexy it made you feel. You know, the bad girl in you!
BTW, did you like what I sent for the shoot?
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