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May 29, 2012 15:48

Loves thickest consort ( Read more... )

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another_dexter May 30 2012, 06:22:26 UTC
I really like the fifth line. The way this is composed reads with a certain rhythm, which is nice.

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vixenzpistol May 30 2012, 21:13:31 UTC
Thank you, I always try to keep a tempo with everything that I write.

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halafax May 30 2012, 13:53:07 UTC
I always enjoy reading your poems dear.

I like the last three lines. Its a question Ive asked more than once over the years.

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vixenzpistol May 30 2012, 21:21:12 UTC
It'sone everyone asks. Lol unfortunately, some of us way more than others. Lol

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halafax May 30 2012, 22:27:41 UTC
Isnt that the truth doll?

*hug*

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exsrl920 May 30 2012, 16:24:29 UTC
happy early birthday. nice entry.

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vixenzpistol May 30 2012, 21:23:08 UTC
Aw, thank you! :)

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