Omg Cali, you went and made me want to write something.
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The moon was bright, an eerie kind of glaring light over the lush forest of towering mushrooms below.
A slight shadow moved seamlessly along the water's edge, the eyes bright and alert, the ears twitching in each direction, listening for any sound. It paused, sinking low on its hunches to
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It also strikes me as funny that two of your characters are involved in the story...when does Amajda show up? What about your drunk friends from This Bar, swaying in the breeze as they walk boistrously down the path from Shattrah and happen to bump into the grand conflict which may save or damn the souls of the brave adventurers.
I am intrigued, as I enjoy stories...of all kinds. Who was that mysterious villain? Who shall emerge as the hero? Above all WHERE IS PETROV!?!
Oh wait, he is drunk with Nighteyes and Keoko, and they are managing to find some sort of ridiculous trouble of their own.
[Truly good story so far, run with it! I always support writing of any sort.]
--Greg
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lol, good to know I'm inspiring someone out there.
*loves*
Cali
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