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Mar 24, 2010 19:45

this is what i've been doing, in between watching episodes of the show, the last few days. i'm a little upset i actually managed to finish it, tbh, just because writing it really helped take my mind off things. i don't know that it's terribly accurate, or even something anyone wants to read, and nowhere near well-written, i don't think, since it's ( Read more... )

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cukirepa March 25 2010, 18:48:49 UTC
I just watched the latest episode, then found this gem on my friend list.

I liked so much about the story: the slowly progressing Nate/Eric relationship, the G/Sam banter and of course Hetty. I loved your Hetty. I would definitely read more. Thank you!

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vlieger April 2 2010, 01:35:13 UTC
thank you so much :) i'm glad you liked it.

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lucylooo April 2 2010, 00:45:47 UTC
Oh, I love you so much, and I love this, and Nate is perfect, and HETTY, and yes. You have rendered me, surprisingly, much more incoherent than I usually am, but THIS.

Did I mention I love you? I do. Yes.

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vlieger April 2 2010, 01:35:29 UTC
aw, thank you! :D

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vlieger April 2 2010, 01:36:22 UTC
i'm so glad the characterisations worked for you, really. the fear of getting them wrong is the main reason i've never written this fandom before. thank you :)

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robanybody April 2 2010, 02:07:44 UTC
Oh, my, this is just so lovely and lyrical. I love the stop-start interaction between Nate and Eric and how natural the rhythms of the dialogue felt throughout the entire piece. And I love how you effortlessly wove the entire cast into the story and got every single one of them right.

Beautifully done and what I'd really wanted to read in this fandom. Thank you.

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vlieger April 2 2010, 02:12:49 UTC
oh, thank you so much!

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thefannishwaldo April 3 2010, 22:27:35 UTC
This is really nicely done. For some reason it never occurred to me that these two would make a really good pair, but the more I read this, the more I realized how they totally would. Both a little socially awkward, both feeling a little on the 'outside' next to the agents.

Everyone was spot-on in character - even when you had Sam and G in the background, you did a great job with them.

Great story! :)

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vlieger April 3 2010, 23:08:06 UTC
haha yeah i thought i was mostly alone in the nate/eric department. i'm glad it worked for you, thank you :)

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