TITLE: ALL SHOOK UP...part 7

Aug 25, 2007 16:37

TITLE: ALL SHOOK UP ( Read more... )

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sweetje August 25 2007, 21:33:34 UTC
There will always be a small part of Ennis that regrets not having any children of his own, but he's not sorry that he chose Jack over Alma. He may still have his reservations about their relationship, but I believe that he will overcome them and stay with Jack.
I hope Ennis changes his mind and decides to study for he GED with Jack. It would be wonderful if they both could get the cerificate of achievement. Then neither one of them would feel as if he were a failure. It's amazing what a piece of paper can do for your self confidence.
I can hardly wait for Jack's hitch to be up so our boys can be together properly.

I enjoyed this chapter. Even with its tense moments, I still had hope that it would end on a positive note. :)
Debra

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vln_bbmfan August 26 2007, 00:24:51 UTC
Ennis mostly knows that he's doing the right thing by being with Jack ( ... )

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testa_dura August 25 2007, 21:34:32 UTC
It's so like Jack to want that GED not just for himself but for the both of them. While Ennis is trying to treat Jack like some calf w/ his brand on him, he should stop and think how much he owes that blue-eyed GI!
Loved it, Vicki. Well worth the wait!

Tes

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vln_bbmfan August 26 2007, 00:26:40 UTC
Jack just wants a study buddy! *grin*
Ennis is trying to hold on to the only life he knows, even as he makes the decision to leave it behind. He really needs Jack, more than Jack actually realizes.
Hopefully the next part won't be so long in coming!

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haljbg August 25 2007, 21:49:03 UTC

Hi,
Glad to see your update. I missed this story. Like the way you are going. Love your Ennis. It's not easy for him to accept all the changes in his life but his love for Jack makes it possible. Thanks Emmy.

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vln_bbmfan August 26 2007, 00:29:43 UTC
Sorry it took so long for this update. Hopefully I can get back to a regular schedule now that this years round of family reunions are over.
You're right. Ennis is having some problems adapting to all the changes, but he's sticking with it, sometimes even to his own surprise. :-)

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Lovely! senseofpeace August 25 2007, 21:58:44 UTC
Everytime you post it is like a precious gift. I can tell how much time and enery you put into every word. This chapter was amazing. Your characterizations, as always, were spot on. I also enjoyed your dialogue, both between our guys and with Ennis and himself. I am already desperate for your next update! Thank you for posting- your work is exceptional. I cannot tell you how happy I was to see this pop up on my friend's list. You bring joy!

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Re: Lovely! vln_bbmfan August 26 2007, 00:32:40 UTC
Wow. What a really nice comment. Thank you so much for the most generous words. :-)
I hope I can continue to meet such high standards.
And a little more timely, too. I was actually surprised when I posted this chapter to find that I was one day short of being a whole month since the last post. *gasp*

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lalaynia August 25 2007, 22:09:29 UTC
There were so many wonderful lines in this I don't know where to begin. The whole chapter felt like a hug.

Just like the man himself, that damned voice could make him feel light-hearted and ready to spit nails, damn near in the same breath.

LOL!! So true!

With a hand on either side of Jack's face, he looked down into those blue eyes that belonged to the only hope he ever had for anything more than just surviving this life. "Thank ya, Bud," he whispered softly. "Would a been fuckin' miserable if ya hadn't come along when ya did."

Awww...:melt:

I'll leave some for others to quote. Thank you, I just adore this story.
-J

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vln_bbmfan August 26 2007, 02:16:06 UTC
You picked up a couple of my favorite parts! :-)
Ennis is like a fish out of water, but he seems to know who his favorite pond is, even if he's still not completely comfortable with everything that's going on.

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