All I Want For Christmas (Part Two)--fangirlgonewild

[fangirlgonewild]

Title: All I Want For Christmas (Part Two)
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[spikeshunny]

I'm not a beta. But i just want to say i loved this.

[fangirlgonewild]

whoo-hoo!
I heart the icon, by the way.

[spikeshunny]

Aww thanks unfortunately i didn't make this one.

But yeah excellent premise.

[havemy_heart]

I have to admit, I didn't realize you weren't going to continue from the last chapter, so I was really surprised to see when this one took place. I still loved it though.

I'll leave this for someone more experienced to beta, but I wanted to point out a couple of small boo-boos - Veronica's Saturn is silver, not white. And Logan lives on the twelfth floor, but you mention only six flights of stairs.

I was a little confused as to why Logan would give Veronica a lily necklace. I know they both loved her, but it seems that he'd want to give Veronica something independent of Lilly.

[fangirlgonewild]

sweet...I was hoping someone would know exactly what floor he lived on. I figured if I added "finally" to the next bit it would be like he continued down the stairs...but now I can change it so it's really clear. And I'll swap the silver bit out as well.
Actually the lily necklace was something I saw in a jewelry store and thought looked really cool. I figured it would be like a reminder of the necklace Lilly herself gave Veronica, but something also to remind her of Logan.
Thank you thank you!

[starxd_sparrow]

Lovely, once again. Smut does make everything better :D