Comments | vm_betas: FIC: Haunted (?) (Logan/Veronica)

inthevast in vm_betas

FIC: Haunted (?) (Logan/Veronica)

Mar 05, 2007 19:15

Tentatively Titled: Haunted (part 1a of ( Read more... )

Comments 15

pegm81484 March 6 2007, 02:30:12 UTC

This was actually really good. I didn't find any grammatical/spelling mistakes, but I would be willing to beta this and future chapters for you. Let me know if you would like me to and I'll give you my email address.

I've only beta-ed a few fics before this, but I'm pretty good with the English language and can usually spot errors. I'll certainly give you any advice/critique that you want or need depending on the chapter.

Ok, let me know!

inthevast March 6 2007, 19:12:33 UTC

Hey that would be fantastic if you would beta. I would really appreciate any eyes I can get on this. If you give me your email I can send you the first 3 chapters or so when it's finished. :)

And lol. Your icon disturbs me.

pegm81484 March 6 2007, 19:24:16 UTC

My email is pem81484@aol.com; send me whatever you want whenever and I'll try to get back to you as soon as possible.

I'm sorry that my icon distrubs you lol, is this one better?

inthevast March 6 2007, 19:30:31 UTC

Much better. I love that photo. hehe

flinkkamingo3 March 6 2007, 04:32:04 UTC

Yikes. That's creepy. And very intriguing.

I looked it over for grammar errors and stuff like that but couldn't find anything. It seems good to me.

And seriously, don't say you're "not a very good writer." You are good. And this seems fresh and dark and actually interesting, something you don't really get from a good portion of the fics that are out there. If you want to see some bad fic, I'm sure I can direct you to some at ff.net.

Not that I would. Because that would be mean.

Seriously, though, this is definitely awesome.

inthevast March 6 2007, 19:14:43 UTC

My main issue with writing for VM is Veronica's povs. I just feel like I can't write her even though I actually really like her, more then Logan right now! Haha.

Thanks for reading. Hopefully I'll be ahead enough with the story to post the entire first chapter in the next week or two.

starxd_sparrow March 6 2007, 05:28:10 UTC

Oooh! This is intriguing, dear! And how can you say you're not a good writer? This made my skin crawl (you know, in that 'well-written horror' sort of way... not that 'this is terrible' sort of way ;P)

If you need a beta, you can always count on me. Your grammar is pretty clean, a few little oversights that can easily be tidied. Characterization, even in creepy nightmare land, seems good so far.

If you need me, e-mail me at jls272 AT gmail DOT com.

inthevast March 6 2007, 19:16:18 UTC

Excellent. I would love so much for you to beta. When I get the first 3 chapters done, I'll send them on to you, okay? :)

starxd_sparrow March 6 2007, 20:07:04 UTC

Okay, dear, whatever is good for you :)

rindee March 6 2007, 06:14:16 UTC

I just sent you an email with some suggestions/corrections. Let me know if you don't get them, or can't see the comments, editing, etc. Also - in case I forgot to tell you in my notes - I love the last sentence. Nice twist.

inthevast March 6 2007, 19:17:18 UTC

Hey I got it. :) I will respond later, when I'm not at work.

havemy_heart March 6 2007, 15:50:31 UTC

I really like this so far. Your writing is nothing to be ashamed of. This is suitable creepy and I can't wait to read more :-)

inthevast March 6 2007, 19:29:25 UTC

Thank you! I hope to be ahead enough with this to make a full post of chapter one in the next two weeks or so at most. :)