Chapter 7: Hello Hearst

[ladyanne04]

Title: All Fall Down
Pairing / Character: Veronica/Logan, Keith
Rating: PG-13 to R
Words: 44,500
Summary: In Neptune, the brighter the summer sun, the deeper the shadows.
Spoilers / Warnings: Seasons 1 and 2 / Language and adult situations
Chapter 7: Hello Hearst!
Author: ladyanne04 and lex_83
Additional Characters: Wallace
Rating: PG-13 for language and some

Comments

[syderia]

Great chapter!

[ladyanne04]

Thank you!

[bijal]

I don't know what it says about me that of all the lovely things in this chapter, my favorite part was the following:

She took the brochure from his hands and flipped it open to read. “Hello Hearst is a weekend of fun, friendship and foundations for freshman.”

“How . . . alliterative."

My thoughts exactly. Hee. ;)

It says nothing but good things about you, though, for writing a great chapter and stepping up the mystery surrounding the three girls. I was pleasantly intrigued before, but even more so now, with this new information.

Also, hi, Wallace. It had been a while since we'd seen him last, so I was wondering when he's show up again.

[ladyanne04]

Yeah! I spent a ridiculous amount of time trying to come up with something alliterative there - so thank you - glad you enjoyed.

[lacietinnc]

Awesome, cant wait for more!

[ladyanne04]

Hey, a fellow NCer! Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

[i_am_scary]

And the bitch returns, I guess.

This mystery is unfolding wonderfully. I wonder if Professor Nick has had his fingers in lots of pies, you know?

You two have a talent for dialog.

[ladyanne04]

Thank you so much!

[sakuracorr]

Oooooooh, interesting developments, ooooooooooh! Yay! *does a little dance* (Sorry this is like not coherent, I'm so very tired).

[ladyanne04]

No problem - I'm right there with you on the tired! And thanks for commenting, - glad you liked.