Chapter 9: Here, Pussy, Pussy

[kantayra]

Title: All Fall Down
Pairing / Character: Veronica/Logan, Keith
Rating: PG-13 to R
Words: 67,534 to date
Summary: In Neptune, the brighter the summer sun, the deeper the shadows.
Spoilers / Warnings: Seasons 1 and 2 / Language and adult situations
Chapter 9: Here, Pussy, Pussy
Author: kantayra
Additional Characters: Wallace, Back-Up
Rating: PG-13
Words: 9

Comments

[remedychild]

well, "fuck" is right! eek!

but at the same time i'm glad logan initiated the talk and made veronica re-think the way she was acting, it's annoying when all the fics out there make logan be the groveling mess. or something. anyway, i loved this chapter and i can't wait until next week. =D i also really loved the wallace/logan intereaction.

i wish i were more coherent but my brain is quite mushy past a certain time, i apologize.

[reve_silencieux]

Hee! I love Logan/Wallace. It's so much fun to see them work together. You had their voices down pat, especially Wallace's reactions to Logan's ranting and behavior to the maid.

But I'm really happy Logan finally talked to Veronica. She has to realize that he won't stick around forever. His relationship past is...well the girls have never been good to him, so just like he told her about Lilly and loving her and putting more in than her - it's not fair to him. And I don't know if that sentence made sense, but suffice to say - I loved it. Thankfully the Nyquil did make Veronica at least start to think about their relationship. Hopefully Logan's words will get her to open up now.

Very fun chapter, and I'm impressed you wrote two chapters back to back! Can I borrow your muse? Mine fled the country.

[crazybohemian18]

Well, great, now I'm gonna be all Logan/Veronica breakup depressed ;). But seriously, it's good that Logan stood up to Veronica and made her listen to him and realize that she couldn't just take him for granted. And I *love* the Wallace and Logan parts. I love Wallace/Logan friendship fics because I think they would have a great relationship, both knowing just how...difficult Veronica can be.

[afrocurl]

D'oh!! Veronica, as much as I love her, needs to realize what's she doing to poor Logan. My little shipping heart is all sad at the end, especially after Veronica realized, even if under heavy medication, that she wants Logan.

I'm so happy to see Pussy return, and cause more problems. I'm especially happy to see that Wallace and Logan had to work together on a case. Their interactions are way too funny for words.

The flashbacks to a young Keith and th IAB investigation were also really effective at getitng at what is going on with Lianne and Frank. I'm even more interested as to who Frank was getting money from, but I will gladly wait until next week.

[flinkkamingo3]

Just fantastic. Big-Birdmobile is the best description of Logan's car I've ever come across. And the fight between Logan and V? Gah, heartbreaking. And now I'm ever more eager than usual for the next installment.