Chapter 17: Figure Study

[ladydisdain225]

Title: All Fall Down
Pairing / Character: Veronica/Logan, Keith
Rating: PG-13 to R
Words: 133901
Summary: In Neptune, the brighter the summer sun, the deeper the shadows.
Spoilers / Warnings: Seasons 1 and 2 / Language and adult situations
Chapter 17: Figure Study
Author: ladydisdain225
Additional Characters: Vinnie Van Lowe
Rating: R
Words: 5312
Author’s Note:

Comments

[funkyfresh23]

Absolutely fantastic! I love Mister Van Lowe every time

Can't wait for next weekend!

[ladydisdain225]

Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it.

[mutinousmuse]

Of the myriad things I love about this chapter, I'd like to give particular kudos for the cliffhanger ending. You rock!

[ladydisdain225]

Thanks for all your betaing help, sweetie!

[kattine]

ooo so that's the reason for no police...good one! Can't wait till next week

[ladydisdain225]

Thank you!

[afrocurl]

That cliffhanger is going to get me until next week, but the end discovery was nicely done. It's good to see the stories coming together.

The nervous tension between Logan and Veronica was great, especially after the conversation with everyone's favorite socialite.

The fact that the 09er cases that Veronica's been on for the whole summer connect with the missing girls was unexpected, but I think I see where the story is goning, and that's great.

Great job with Vinnie and the ability to throw him off track.

[ladydisdain225]

I'm so glad you think it's pulling together as we're nearing the closing stretch.

I'll be interested to see what you think of the upcoming developments.

[hugecerealbox]

Wow! That last part was deffinately a punch in the stomach. Ughhh....That has to be the most disturbing bit of the entire series. Someone had better PAY. Honestly, my emotional involvement in this story just reached an entire new level with that haunting description of the pictures. Well played.

Overall though, clever chapter. I never saw it coming. The scenes with Vinnie were amusing. Veronica outdoing Vinnie will never get old, and nice use of the trademark pen! Characterization was in fine form: "man he was such a freaking girl." I loved that line!

Can I also say that I'm really enjoying your take on Logan in this fic? Somehow, you manage to take the snarky rich boy we all know and love, and highlight his best qualities. Without going OOC or creating a duller version of him you prove how he just might be the best thing for Veronica.

Very sinister stuff indeed! I haven't rooted this hard for V and co. to catch the bad guys since season 1!

[ladydisdain225]

Thank you so much. This is such a lovely response. You don't know what it meant to me - or, indeed, all the authors on this fic - to get this sort of feedback. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and that it's coming together. I hope you're happy with the ultimate result.