Chapter 19: Who's Your Daddy?

[sarah_p]

Title: All Fall Down
Pairing / Character: Veronica/Logan, Keith
Rating: PG-13 to R
Words: 146,991
Summary: In Neptune, the brighter the summer sun, the deeper the shadows.
Spoilers / Warnings: Seasons 1 and 2 / Language and adult situations
Chapter 19: Who's Your Daddy?
Author: ladyanne04 and sarah_p
Additional Characters: Dick, Corny, Wallace, Lars
Rating: PG-13

Comments

OMG!!!!!

[tigereyes320]

I so didn't see that coming.

I have to admit thought I didn't think Logan was going to be getting any in this chapter either. I am starting to feel their pain though.

Maybe we could do something about that.

Great job again

Re: OMG!!!!!

[sarah_p]

Hee, I know....Poor Logan! I mean, it's not like he and Veronica aren't TRYING... ;)

I'm glad the big reveal came as a surprise (DUNDUNDUN!). Thanks so much for reading! :)

[tmt_catalyst]

This story is all kinds of amazing. First, Logan really should invest in some sort of security gate.

Corny is still my favorite underused character ever. And I love that he's been making so many appearances in this story.

Veronica should always, always trust Logan's judgement of people. She trusts the bad guys way too often.

And yay for Keith finally telling Veronica what's been going on. They're too wonderful together to be fighting.

[sarah_p]

Seriously, Logan? THERE IS A LESSON TO BE LEARNED HERE. Heee. AND! CORNY LOVE! He's pretty much the most fantastic character EVER, so I'm glad that others are appreciating his involvement here. It just had to be done, you know?

Ahh, Veronica. That seems to be a fatal flaw of hers...At least she HAS Logan to watch her back! And now she and Keith are on the same page, and there are only three chapters left...Ooooh! :)

Thanks for reading! :)

[crazybohemian18]

Oooh, and the plot thickens...This was a really awesome chapter. The MOTW was good(well, there were a bunch) and I loved the Logan and Veronica interactions and OMG I'm so excited to see what happens! FLAIL FLAIL FLAIL

[sarah_p]

I KNOW! *flails with you* Hee, we've had this planned for SO MANY MONTHS, so it's so great that the reveal got you all riled up...BECAUSE THINGS ARE GOING TO BE HAPPENING. There *are* only three more chapters, after all!

Wheeee! Thanks for reading! :)

[sweetumms33]

Wow. You just tied together so many loose ends...I am excited for the next episode!

[sarah_p]

I'm really glad that everything is making sense and coming together...that means all of us are doing something right! And Saturday isn't TOO far off, so yaaaaay for new chapters!

Thanks for reading and commenting :).

[shinysylver]

I was so right about Tallulah being the bad. Or at least not what she seems. I trusted Logan's judgment way back when he first gave it. I wish Veronica would have. The fact that her ruse has been uncovered with a few more chapters to go makes me think that there is a lot more to this than there seems though.

Oh and despite the fact that Dick is my favorite character I am very VERY glad that he isn't spawning in this fic.

[sarah_p]

HEE, I just want you to know, after I read your comment LAST week, I was all "someone is ON THE BALL." Because that was fantastically insightful :). There *are* three more chapters of mystery to unfold, so there'll be a few more twists and turns, but you've been awesomely perceptive. Which makes US feel good, because we've been trying to build this all up and drop hints along the way, you know?

If Veronica just trusted Logan more the world would totally be a better place. SIGH.

Thanks so much for reading! :)

[shinysylver]

I just wanted to let you know that you all have been doing a wonderful job of weaving the mystery. Appropriate hints have been dropped but not too many. I am actually kinda envious of the skill. :)