Fic: The Box..., PG-13, Logan

Nov 12, 2006 20:15

FicTitle: The Box in the Back of the Closet
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fic, round six

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sodapop_09er November 12 2006, 14:13:22 UTC
That was really touching.

And for someone who's usually into the fluffy or smutty stuff, I'm defintely drawn to this.

I'll be memming this one. :)

I really like several things.
-I like how Logan's upset that his dad's all focused on PR..not stopping to think about the death.
-I like the depths you go in describing Logan and Lilly. I think you captured their relationship well, and how it really was for Logan.
-I also enjoyed the way you captured the confusion for Logan about Veronica's help and moving on in life. I think that played out well.

*high five*

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salingergurl November 13 2006, 10:38:41 UTC
*skink*

Thanks! I haven't written a lot of stuff from season 1, but a little Lilly makes everything more interesting. :) Thanks for reading and a well thought-out comment!

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afrocurl November 12 2006, 16:33:43 UTC
That was beautiful. I really love introspective Logan pieces and I haven't read many of them recently, especially about S1.

It probably didn't help that I was listening to "Forever Young" while reading most of this, but I think you effectively captured the pain of looking through an old box filled with painful memories.

Nicely done for your first challenge.

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salingergurl November 13 2006, 10:39:55 UTC
Ha ha. "Forever Young." Awesome.

Thanks for reading and commenting! I appreciate it!

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