Our Darkest Wishes part 2/2

[voiceinahead]

Umm yeah, I kinda meant to post these two together but then I was in the middle typing it on the computer from my notebooks and then I looked at the clock and it was already time for my rpg group to meet and... well, you know, sometimes a girl really needs to get to smash some alien skulls and blow holes into big war machines.

What, you never have

Comments

[blaze_nightstar]

"I don't want to blush like mad next time Peter calls me brother and I remember you and your darkest wishes." - Classic! :D
A great second part to it. :) Edmund's misinterpretation of Caspian's fears at the start was really good. Great work.

[prilimpimpim]

You definetely should add a piece (a rather large one) of smut to this lovely ending.

You've left me waiting on it! *__*

[peaceypoo]

Ooooooh, this was just so very, very, very good!! Honestly, I really enjoyed reading it; especially y
this second part, because RAWR.
Also, I really liked the way you described Edmund's feelings towards Jadis, because that's almost exactly how I imagine him feeling, so, yeah. That bit was fantastic!!
Also, you know. Ahem. Smut is never out of place, is it? Besides, you already have such a fantastic buildup. Regardless, I think the story works very well without it, and leaving it on such a suggestive note is nice. But what I'm trying to say is; it works fine either way, but it wouldn't hurt to have some sexytiems!! (Am I confusing you as much as I'm confusing myself with this comment?)
All in all; brilliant story!!

[keyla_yeppo]

SEQUEL, PLEASE!

preferrably, a very hot, smutty sequel.

[eijifujiryoma]

Apparently something was wrong with my eyes and I hadn't noticed the link to this part. -_-;;

Anyway, that was lovely but such a tease! SEQUELLLLLLLLL. Pwease? XD

Actually, I've always wanted to try/read something like that, where they actually end up sailing home to Narnia. It would be an interesting sequence to see how things go and how the relationships progress [taking into account Liliandell] as well as finding a different way for the Pevensies+Eustace to go back [because they have to, obviously]. Hmm.