New Song: Feedback Requested

[voiceofkiki]

So the lyrics are still a work in progress.  They still need to be cleaned up a bit.  Constructive suggestions welcome.

“Priest”

TTTO: “Creep” by Radiohead

When we burst through the door

I saw to my surprise

A round limbless creature

With hundreds of eyes

Float o'er a battalion

Of orcs and undead

Warrior preps his special

They all prep their

Comments

[breakmanz]

Love it and I'd love to hear it recorded!