Just popping out from the depths of lurkerdom to say:
Overall I think you're doing a fabulous job of playing her - apart from the one nitpick I'm going to get to in a minute, your voice and characterization are spot-on.
THAT BEING SAID: In canon, Franziska rarely calls people by anything other than their full names, to the point where Phoenix and Edgeworth both repeatedly comment on it in T & T. Your Franziska, on the other hand, doesn't do that. It's not a huge deal, but it's still less-than-entirely faithful to the way she speaks.
Thank you so much for taking the time to say this to me. ♥ I-I hope I'm playing her right, and for you to say that I am is really gratifying. So thank you!
And for this part, I never realized it was used so frequently! I always interpreted the times she called them out with their full names as when she was in a certain mood or situation (read: pissed or condescending). She often refers to Phoenix as 'Mr. Wright' when she's talking to him normally... I think. But I'll try to make her call them by their full names more often to stay true to her voice, thank you for pointing this out to me. I really appreciate it!
Skulkingly can be a word. xDD Edit: Also omg, you think I'm worthy enough to be lurked over. ;_____________;
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Overall I think you're doing a fabulous job of playing her - apart from the one nitpick I'm going to get to in a minute, your voice and characterization are spot-on.
THAT BEING SAID: In canon, Franziska rarely calls people by anything other than their full names, to the point where Phoenix and Edgeworth both repeatedly comment on it in T & T. Your Franziska, on the other hand, doesn't do that. It's not a huge deal, but it's still less-than-entirely faithful to the way she speaks.
*returns to skulking in the shadows. skulkingly
...shut up, that's totally a word*
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I-I hope I'm playing her right, and for you to say that I am is really gratifying. So thank you!
And for this part, I never realized it was used so frequently! I always interpreted the times she called them out with their full names as when she was in a certain mood or situation (read: pissed or condescending). She often refers to Phoenix as 'Mr. Wright' when she's talking to him normally... I think. But I'll try to make her call them by their full names more often to stay true to her voice, thank you for pointing this out to me. I really appreciate it!
Skulkingly can be a word. xDD
Edit: Also omg, you think I'm worthy enough to be lurked over. ;_____________;
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