Unexpected Loyalties: A Toad Fanfiction

[vonnix]

Title: Unexpected Loyalties

Comments

[larissafae]

I KNOW that you didn't spell "summary" as "summery", just like I KNOW that you didn't write "X-Men" as "x-men", because I know that I went over with you that X-Men is a proper noun, and thus always capitalised. Always.

You WILL send your next chapters to me, and I will correct your grammar and spelling and send the beta'd product back to you. You have no choice, bb. This is the way it has to be.

I'll send you the re-beta'd version of this chapter later; I spy a couple typos you missed. *hugs and loves on* I love you with all the ardent passion of a romantic friendship, bb.

[vonnix]

Now, as an excuse, the 'xmen' that I didn't capitalize were both used as section/page breaks and not actual words per se.

As for summery... I've got nothing. I blame my spell check for not catching it.

And that icon's creepy. I need to find or make a sheepish or scared icon to counterbalance it. Hmm... maybe tomorrow.

ILU2!! *hugs and loves back*

[larissafae]

"Go clear out the front hall!" was what the X-mens team

[vonnix]

whoops