A short story

[vorspiel]

Something's Got To Give

A story by Chuck Davison

Last time I checked, I was content. I can't say that life hasn't provided for me. I have all the Dean Koontz books a person could want, an internet connection, plenty of food, and the sweet deliciousness of orange juice. I stay in most of the time, and work in a dark lit coffee shop on

Comments

[sordid_vision]

Fucking Christ that was brilliant. You just made my day Mr. Davison :D

I'm guessing that by reading all of those books a writing talent was bound to emerge.

[vorspiel]

Are you serious? I reread it and it just seems blocky to me. Thanks though :p

[sordid_vision]

Well, I like it a lot. Just enough pull and description but not enough to overwhelm someone. A writer will always be their own worst critic.

[vorspiel]

If I left you a copy of this, would you ask your english teacher their thoughts on it?

[sordid_vision]

Oh yes, most definitely!

[vorspiel]

Be expecting an envelope waiting for you in the library. If Graham is there, it'll be with her. Go around...lunch-ish time.

[sordid_vision]

Okays :D