My boyfriend can't write worth a penny, His poetry's bad if there's any. I've taken my cue To try limericks too, And I'm sure I can write very many.
I must say these poems were fun, And hard to stop once they're begun; So to keep this much shorter I'll critique in order: Didn't like, liked, liked, liked--now I'm done.
**grins**
(Btw, Brian, I was joking about your writing skillz. Or lack thereof.)
So instead of just being plain mean I'll go along with your limerick scheme But Brian's still dumb Hey, this poem's really fun! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA *glee*
*snickers* Nuthin' but love, man. Nuthin' but love.
Well, now that I have had the meaning of "pitching a tent" kindly explained to me, I get that first one...Yes, I didn't know what it was. So sue me :-P
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His poetry's bad if there's any.
I've taken my cue
To try limericks too,
And I'm sure I can write very many.
I must say these poems were fun,
And hard to stop once they're begun;
So to keep this much shorter
I'll critique in order:
Didn't like, liked, liked, liked--now I'm done.
**grins**
(Btw, Brian, I was joking about your writing skillz. Or lack thereof.)
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I'll go along with your limerick scheme
But Brian's still dumb
Hey, this poem's really fun!
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA *glee*
*snickers* Nuthin' but love, man. Nuthin' but love.
^___^
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