[Gaining From Loss] - Chapter 8 (Final)
Length: Chapter - Complete
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Adventure/Romance
Warning(s): BL, Swearing
Character(s): Ash, Paul, others
Pairing(s): Paul x Ash
Summary: After thrown into certain situations, Ash and Paul must work together to get back what was lost and make it out alive.
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Paul is Paul, no matter what you’re going ( ... )
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“Don’t let go.” Paul muttered.
Ash thought he meant “don’t let go of your breath” but then the grip on his wrist slid down to his hand and suddenly he felt horrible for thinking Paul would betray him.
THAT PART OHGODDD. the "don't let go", I just HNGDKFSDLSKDJKF SERISOULSY HNGGGG. I guess part of that part's impact is the fact that Paul's been pretty unsocial with Ash so far and then suddenly he's holding his hand and telling him not to let go. Also I feel like this kinda the turning point, where Ash stops thinking Paul is ... eeh what's the word again... well "bad" guy and starts seeing that he can actually be nice. Anyway, this whole end to the fourth chapter is awesome and I send you million kilos of cookies for writing it!!!
Ash didn’t notice until now that their hands were still clasp together. He felt a little thump in the back of his heart but he just figured it was from the adrenaline of being chased and escaping.
Continued handholding even when the danger is already over<333 And I understand Ash, if Paul was holding my ( ... )
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alright my comment for the seventh chapter was somewhat decent so i am just gonna say that the top moments of this chapter were when a) ash finally understood paul better (that he too cared about his pokemon) b)
The Veilstone trainer shook his head from the mental image but for some reason he continued to stare at the water dripping down Ash’s tan neck. Paul swallowed the ( ... )
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this feels nostalgic because i'm sure this fic is one of the first shinsato fics i've read when i became a fan of the ship! (actually, i became a fan in may 2012 or a bit before, so it's been four years now, woaah time flies by! and they're still my numero uno otp <3)
so yeah, thank you for finishing the fic <33 i love how you don't really rush things between them, friendshippy scenes with hints of dokis is always so cute with them lol. btw, when shinji said "you trusted me back then, why can't you now?", idk why but it made me think of sasuke?? anyway, this line was a killer. i also liked when shinji talked to pikachu (also the "tell pikachu i said thank you" was cute!), and the scene when they all had breakfast together, it reminded me of one of clunker's comics! i liked how shinji silently acknowledges takeshi and hikari, by nodding to them, it's a nice touch ( ( ... )
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