help needed from english speakers

Feb 08, 2005 23:32

I need english correction for that short alternative Punish Yourself bio, please make any orthographical comment needed...

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bon dianorae April 21 2004, 11:42:43 UTC
je suis pas experte en theme version, mais je pense (chu pas sure hein :-/) que y'a un soucis au niveau de "just mixed anything we'd love ", ca donne du conditionnel avec we'd, alors que t'a du passé ds la deuxieme moitié de ta phrase concernant le visuel. C'est comme si tu disait que du point de vu musical vous avez melangé tout ce que vous auriez aimé, et pour le visual vous avez choisi etc...

J'opterais donc pour un anything we love/loved

Mais pas tapé si je me trompe ^^

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et aussi... dianorae April 21 2004, 11:46:40 UTC
bon la c'est un peu chercher la ptite bete mais... "we chose UV lights and stroboscopes because that was a great lightshow to get high by". Le that semble mal choisi vu que tu designe 2 objets, mais le they collerais pas trop ici... peut-etre "UV lights and stroboscopes making/creating a great lightshow to get high by".

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i don't know if someone else did it already.... screamagekicks April 21 2004, 13:09:05 UTC
When you are a french wanker mainly concerned with drugs, B-movies, bad
comics and going out in gay clubs, you have two possibilities: just staying
a wanker, or creating a band. We chose the band. On the musical side, we
just mixed anything we loved (industrial dance, punk, hardcore-techno,
batcave, glam, psychobilly and so on ) until no brains were left; on the visual
side, we chose UV lights and stroboscopes because that was a great lightshow
to get high to. People seemed to like it.
After years touring Europe, we believe more than ever in our natural
destiny, which is : making noise, taking drugs, and getting drunk while freaky people move
their body to the rythm. All in good dark fun...

there were really very few.

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Re: Maintainer Speaking vx69 April 21 2004, 13:18:15 UTC
thank you sooo much !
by the way, the "all good dark fun" was a semi-quote from Motorhead lyrics ("all good clean fun"), so I thought it was alright...

hell, this makes me wanna listen to some old Lemmy stuff.

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