Dorothy From Kansas, Part 1

[wabishtar]

OK, so those who've been talking to me lately know that I've been extremely depressed what with the life I had planned for myself falling apart. As a part of this depression, I've been unable to get myself to write anything. This is unacceptable. I don't think I'm going to be happy until I start writing again, ergo, I must write. However, I'm

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[satinalien]

Fun! I'm interested where you take it. Faye was always amusing to play.

My only question is whether the computer text is audible, legible, something to Faye or if it is just to the reader. That was a titch unclear.

[emrldgirrl]

Admittedly, I know nothing about writing, but I know quite a bit about reading and what makes a good read. And I am very interested in this concept and the wordcraft is good in my opinion. I look forward to further installments.

It actually reads a little like a fleshed out television script, given your background I don't think that is a bad thing. Come to think of it, it somewhat reminiscent of the style of the Joss script pages I have seen.

If this is somewhat unclear, forgive me, it is very early and I have not slept.

Evan's Beard says:

[emrldgirrl]

A few initial impressions