Dorothy From Kansas, Part 4

[wabishtar]

Edit time! I got some bad feedback on part 3. Apparently, I can't write porn. Well, you never know until you try. Anyway, I rewrote part 3 and cut it into two different sections, the second one you see before you. If you read the pre-edit version, the one that was my crappy attempt at erotica, go back and read part 3 before you read this,

Comments

[temtan]

Better, much. I had some issues with the first version.