Comments | wakeyourheart: summer.

wakeyourheart

summer.

Aug 22, 2010 00:54

Title: Summer
Author: kissoffools / wakeyourheart
Pairing: Arthur/Ariadne.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Four seasons, a million moments, one lifetime.
Disclaimer: This is all Christopher Nolan. I'm just playing around.
Notes: For inception_kink - the prompt was "four seasons". Word Count: 2,140. A year in Arthur and Ariadne's lives, mapped out by seasons.

( When he looks at the level she’s designed for his dream, the way she outlines the walls of the maze with her finger, the way she murmurs, “Paradox” with a satisfied smile - it’s then that Arthur realizes he trusts her. )

character: arthur, pairing: arthur/ariadne, rating: pg-13, character: cobb, character: ariadne, year: 2010, genre: het, purpose: fic prompt, subject: inception

Comments 61

joannacullen August 22 2010, 05:34:30 UTC

You WOULD post a fic right as I was about to go to bed. If it had been anyone else, I would have just left a tab open and read tomorrow.

Beautiful, Janna. I like fiction (regardless of medium) that operates on the seasonal structure. I just think it works nicely. This made me think a little of 500 Days of Summer, like some weird cross between that and Inception, but weird in a good way. I like it when Arthur is allowed to have feelings. Yeah, he might be the point man, but he has needs too. Pretty girls still catch his eye.

And let's face it. He just wanted to kiss Ariadne in that dream. There was no real reason for it. There's definitely some hound dog in him. ;)

Like I said, super good. :)

kissoffools August 22 2010, 05:55:33 UTC

HAHA, I'm sorry! My timing is le awful. /o\ You shoulda just waited till the morning, dude.

But I'm so glad you read it and that you liked it. And I love love love when you leave me kind comments like this. :D

joannacullen August 22 2010, 06:05:18 UTC

You should try your hand over at inception100. I've been enjoying it over there. :) In fact, I may have just posted one. :P

kissoffools August 22 2010, 06:15:44 UTC

Ha, I have learned that I'm horribly awful at any sort of timed challenge. /o\ I think I'll stick to doing kink meme fills for now! I've been having a blast playing there.

And ooh yeah? I'm going to bed now, but I'll check it out tomorrow for sure. :D

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oatmeal_cookie August 22 2010, 06:09:31 UTC

Oh, my heart. <333

kissoffools August 22 2010, 06:16:09 UTC

<33333

joannacullen August 22 2010, 06:18:22 UTC

You've followed into this fandom as well?! How lovely. :D

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kissoffools August 23 2010, 18:48:27 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! :D

scarlet_ebony August 22 2010, 06:29:32 UTC

'Ariadne's a small-town girl.'
Was I the only one who had Journey promptly pop into my head when I read that?
Lulz. Shutting up now.

But other than that, ZOMG! BEAUTIFUL WRITING!
I think my favourite line was:
'“We were summer,” she says. “It’s fall now.”'
Reminded me of Paris, Je'taime.

I enjoyed every bit of this fic. Thank you for posting!

kissoffools August 23 2010, 18:49:06 UTC

Lmao, don't worry, I totally thought of Journey when I wrote that. Oops.

I love Paris, Je T'aime!

Thank you for leaving a comment! :)

xonancy August 22 2010, 06:42:55 UTC

*sigh* this was incredibly beautiful and sweet <33
loved every moment of it. pls keep writing more a/a fics, kkk? :)

kissoffools August 23 2010, 18:49:56 UTC

I have no plans to stop writing A/A fic anytime soon. ;P

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment!