don't tell anyone, but i love you

May 29, 2011 01:15

Title: Don't Tell Anyone, But I Love You
Author: kissoffools
Pairing: Drabbles 1-10 are Mark/Eduardo; drabbles 11-20 are Jesse/Andrew.
Rating: PG-13 overall.
Summary: Twenty snapshots in two relationships.
Disclaimer: Half of these are based on the fictionalized creations of Aaron Sorkin and David Fincher; half of these are real people being played around ( Read more... )

pairing: jesse/andrew, pairing: mark/eduardo, character: dustin moskovitz, rating: pg-13, character: jesse eisenberg, subject: the social network, year: 2011, purpose: fics20in20, character: mark zukerberg, character: andrew garfield, character: eduardo saverin

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pipry23 May 29 2011, 06:00:57 UTC
Oh. My God. The first one. The prose is beautiful. I can't help but see it through the eyes of a screenwriter and imagine what an amazing, simple scene that would be. stop/what/look; do you see that/see what/you're beautiful. brilliant.

Before Sy can finish bearing down, Mark leans forward. He goes to grab Sy’s shoulder, tries to tell him stop it, I didn’t want this, it wasn’t his fault. But Sy barrels on and Eduardo blinks, crushed, and Mark sits back in his seat, defeated.

Yes. YES. That was the scene in the movie where I was like GODDAMMIT YOU ASSHOLES MARK IS NOT AN ASSHOLE, HE LOVES HIM DONT YOU SEEEEEE. you pick up on that perfectly. akjslfk.

Mark’s focused on his goulash - fuck goulash, the Kirkland cafeteria sucks - and he blinks across the table at Dustin in confusion.It's really random but something as little as that just proves how fucking well you know this boy and this universe. I feel like you could walk into Harvard and know your way around. Also, squee at the Dustin mention! I've been in love with Joseph Mazzello ( ... )

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pipry23 May 29 2011, 06:18:04 UTC
okay i have also never read jesse/andrew before. i have just admired their love from afar on tumblr. but with this

When Jesse texts Andrew one day on his lunch break - dude i found the best fucking scones in the east village today.

i know that i have found my new otp OMG

He does not expect a package of scones to turn up in his mailbox a week later.

AHEEHEEHEE

no, they’re not fucking warm, you didn’t mail them in an oven. why are they here?

UMMMM I LOVE JESSE

east village’s are still better.

fuck you! is Andrew’s reply, and Jesse laughs.

love you too.

augh fuck i'm in love

OMG JESSE IS JUST THE DEAREST THING I'VE EVER READ. HE'S SO UPPITY AND PRECIOUS I CAN'T STAND IT

Three bites later, Andrew is able to happily proclaim the pretzel ”lovely”.

OH GOD ANDREW TOO SO PRECIOUS (apparently i cant even speak in real sentences anymore WHATEVER WHATEVER)

LOL i love that jesse just thought to buy ONE pretzel and give it to andrew <3 and that andrew is just as much as a brat as jesse <3 oh <3<3<3

“I hereby claim this mountain in ( ... )

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pipry23 May 29 2011, 06:34:54 UTC
we’d open your window and stay in your bed all day til the street lights came on

fuck off with that song omg Andrew groans, as if it’s such a chore, this cuddling business. “You are needy,” he comments.

“Mm.”

Jesse can’t see it, but he can feel Andrew’s smile against his curls.

Jesse doesn’t think he could be any happier if he tried.

that's lovely, actually. and makes me kind of sad. i am going to live vicariously through jesse and andrew's love.

Andrew shivers. “We should close the windows,” he says out of nowhere, “it’s getting chilly.” He moves to close them without waiting for a response.

“Fine,” Jesse mumbles.

i... oh. i am just going to ignore this :( also goddamn you are good at dialogue.

WHY IS IT NOT WORKING, WHAT IS HAPPENING

sad breakup fic is hurty and topical. ow. its the "what did i do?" that's the most heartbreaking :( it's the saddest thing you can say to someone because you only say it when you know you've really lost.

your voice was the soundtrack of my summer.

this song always reminds me of you :)

... )

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pipry23 May 29 2011, 06:40:48 UTC
i fucked up my italics at some point but i blame you for distracting me with your awesome so whatever

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logannie May 29 2011, 06:54:42 UTC
Okay so I can tell you right now that I'm not nearly as eloquent in fic commenting as Kate is. So this is just going to be a whole lot of flail and incoherency because that's all I've got right now ( ... )

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kissoffools May 30 2011, 17:55:07 UTC
Ohhhhh you left me such nice words, sister. Thank you so so much. ♥ ♥

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janonny May 29 2011, 07:40:42 UTC
The first one...so very sad. ;___;

The second one is terribly adorable.

The third one was sweet, and then sad, and then you fixed it, and I just want to hug the boys.

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kissoffools May 30 2011, 17:51:49 UTC
:D Thank you bb!

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