what's wrong with this picture?

[walkerminion]

So, you know how it is when you're writing a scene and everything's just humming along with dialogue, setting and characters just kind of clicking in place? Right. Well that's not what's happening with the scene I'm working on now. It's been a bitch to write, but the good news is, I figured out why. The scene has two fundamental problems that I

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[corripera]

This make so much sense to me! I always end up in that boat and after failing at rewriting it for the third time or so, THEN I'll realize it is something wrong with the scene. Ususually rewriting the scene from a different angle/beginning helps me.

Keep going strong. It happens to the best of us.