Holding One's Breath (a WC missing scene for 1.08)

[walking_tornado]

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Comments

[alltoseek]

Practicing holding one's breath in panicky situations is always wise *nods*

Mozzie's chess analogy works much better here than in the script.

Oh, now I want to know, if Neal grabbed some comics, what comics would they be? SuperCatBurglar? The Invisible Artist? Captain Con? :-)

[walking_tornado]

I think he'd snag "Action Detective Squad," the one Avery was bragging about that could buy a car. :)

[treonb]

I so much love Mozzie's chess analogy here. "You need to take yourself off the board" is good advice, if Neal wasn't feeling he had so many other commitments.

[walking_tornado]

Glad you liked it!