a song that isn't entirely finished

[walkinginplace]

Humm humm this tune wherever you go and you'll for sure be a better person. I know it for a fact, even though I've yet to hum it once. How do I know you ask? Well, shucks I used mostly major chords and those are proven to be happier. This is all science talking, and you know not to question science don't you? Good, very good

Comments

[xduckycorex]

I like it.

My harshest critic!

[walkinginplace]

Thanks Ducky. That makes me feel like a winner.

How are you?

[suultana]

do you have your lyrics posted anywhere?

[walkinginplace]

I said let me go, release your hands
Eyes of pure gold and distant lands

But I fall too fast, my knees go weak
eyes of pure gold, fixed on me
and I'm melting

I lost my heart, under cold streetlight
But I play my part, In the dead of night

Am I haunting you? Am I your nightmare?
Do you hear my voice, when I'm not there?
How frightening