Becoming

[walks_inbeauty]

poised words and practiced smiles

Comments

[filmcaptain]

A philisophical graduation will bring new boots.

This is one of your strongest pieces, I love the new direction you've gone wit this and your last piece. Just amazing.

[soulnibbler]

first of all this is exactly why I am who I am. I refuse to play the game and will always refuse. The sentiments are very hard hitting. A couple of changes. though i may read them when i'm done and tell you its simply a matter of style difference