Comments | wallflowerlady: Culpable 1/?

wallflowerlady

Culpable 1/?

Mar 14, 2011 09:47

Summary: Dean was hurt because Sam had been careless, and now Sam had to get on with what needed to be done. Now was not the time to give in to his own aches and pains. Pre-season, hurt/ sick! Sam, minor hurt/ major angst! Dean, angst! John.
Rating: PG

Disclaimer: Would I be writing fanfiction if SPN belonged to me?

( Sam Winchester was uncomfortable. )

sam, dean, supernatural, john, hurt/comfort, pre-season, angst

Comments 13

si_star_x March 14 2011, 08:28:12 UTC

I love the way you managed to capture Sam's inner-ramblings. And? To be continued? Awesome!

wallflowerlady March 14 2011, 09:46:59 UTC

I'm glad you like the Sam-voice - I had a lot of fun writing him here :-) And yes, there is LOTS more to come (poor Sam... ;-p).

si_star_x March 14 2011, 09:55:18 UTC

That's what I like to hear, hehe.

darth_firefly March 14 2011, 11:23:14 UTC

want. more. now. This is just excellent... can't wait to read more!

wallflowerlady March 14 2011, 11:38:30 UTC

Thanks so much :-D More to come soon...

ephemerall March 14 2011, 14:21:59 UTC

I've never read anything by you before, but after reading this i'm not sure WHY i haven't. You've captured Sam's voice so well (I can even hear the perfect intonations in my head) and your writing flows SO WELL. I reallly can't wait to read more of this.

wallflowerlady March 14 2011, 14:33:01 UTC

Thanks so much for your lovely comment! I'm glad Sam comes across believably - I always want to keep them in character and in line with the show, but I'm not sure if I've succeeded all the time, so I'm really pleased it worked :-) This fic is finished, so I'll be posting more tomorrow, hopefully...

dont_hate_me01 March 14 2011, 16:32:17 UTC

Loved the start, can't wait for the next part! I've got a feeling John is so going to take this out on Sam when he finds out. Please update soon.

wallflowerlady March 14 2011, 16:46:03 UTC

How right you are - John is going to be seriously upset. But don't worry... the next part should be up tomorrow, hopefully :-) Thanks so much for commenting!

purplehrdwonder March 14 2011, 17:11:51 UTC

Ooh, I like! Pre-series Sam always interests me and you've done a wonderful job capturing his spirit and voice. John's not gonna be happy... Never a good sign, especially when it comes to Sam. Looking forward to more!

wallflowerlady March 14 2011, 21:04:16 UTC

I love pre-series fics - there are so many opportunities to explore things that aren't possible when they're older, and I like bringing John in (although you're so right here - he's going to be seriously upset with Sam!) Plus, in pre-series fics I can sneak in more hugs ;-)
Thanks so much for the lovely comments!