This is a piece of writing that I wrote for English. Shaedy read it and gave me a look that could have melted ten thousand hearts, so consider yourself warned that this is Alison at her emo-est.
Very detailed, and touching piece of writing. I wish Mine was like that, instead a paper filled with childish Gibberish. Which got a 4 somehow... I guess miracles do happen.
Dunno i'm never good at writing or expressing my feelings down on paper. Only on Msn, dunno why maybe its because its always someone u know and someone u trust... Dunno my emotions are soo random, and changes too easily, with an inspiration of some sort in my surroundings, like music.
Thanks James! I was so nervous handing this in because it's so personal and I wasn't sure if Mr. Cunningham would just think it was teenage crap, but as it turns out he really liked it.
When I write something I like it just kind of flows out of me, I don't have to think about it very much, and for this reason I am at a loss at how teachers teach students how to write.
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Dunno i'm never good at writing or expressing my feelings down on paper. Only on Msn, dunno why maybe its because its always someone u know and someone u trust... Dunno my emotions are soo random, and changes too easily, with an inspiration of some sort in my surroundings, like music.
ANyway Great JOb :D
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When I write something I like it just kind of flows out of me, I don't have to think about it very much, and for this reason I am at a loss at how teachers teach students how to write.
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