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[comment] ficathon of redemption | "and life's too short for me to stop..."

Jan 01, 2015 21:53

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fic: athon, fic: prompt me

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"Impasse" (Klaus/Caroline, PG, future-fic, 2/2) sandrine January 2 2015, 15:52:31 UTC

He tosses and turns in his sleep, like a man plagued by night terrors.

She puts her hand on his cheek carefully, as if she's trying to placate a frightened, wounded animal, and when his eyes snap open it doesn't surprise her that they're a predatory yellow.

She doesn't shrink back, lets him pull her in and kiss her and doesn't pay any mind to the sharp, deadly teeth that could poison her with no more than a scrape. The danger of it doesn't thrill her, doesn't make her lust spike, but it doesn't scare her either. Trusting Klaus with her life is an old game that she's played for a long time now. If he wanted her dead, she'd be dead a dozen times over.

*"Why didn't you turn your mother when she was dying?" he asks one morning, taking a framed picture of her and her mom at graduation from the shelf above the bed ( ... )

Re: "Impasse" (Klaus/Caroline, PG, future-fic, 2/2) drzlilsuga January 2 2015, 20:03:01 UTC

YESSSSSSSSSSSSS! I LOVE IT SO MUCH! THANK YOU!

Re: "Impasse" (Klaus/Caroline, PG, future-fic, 2/2) sandrine January 2 2015, 22:29:33 UTC

My first time writing this ship! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Re: "Impasse" (Klaus/Caroline, PG, future-fic, 2/2) drzlilsuga January 2 2015, 22:57:05 UTC

Really? It reads like you've written them before, that's how great you've gotten their voices down! <3

Re: "Impasse" (Klaus/Caroline, PG, future-fic, 2/2) sandrine January 3 2015, 21:58:48 UTC

Thank you! :) I have some experience writing Klaus, and he's admittedly one of my favourite characters to write in any fandom (perhaps it should worry me how easy I find it to get into Klaus Mikaelsson's head... :p), but I never tackled the ship before.

Re: "Impasse" (Klaus/Caroline, PG, future-fic, 2/2) waltzmatildah January 3 2015, 05:32:05 UTC

drzlilsuga is so right when she says you got their voices so spot on here.

Fantastic job :)

Re: "Impasse" (Klaus/Caroline, PG, future-fic, 2/2) sandrine January 3 2015, 21:59:51 UTC

Aww, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Re: "Impasse" (Klaus/Caroline, PG, future-fic, 2/2) catteo January 3 2015, 13:46:26 UTC

I don't even go here any more, but this is beautiful and haunting and I think you've really captured Caroline's growth so well. Wonderful job.

Re: "Impasse" (Klaus/Caroline, PG, future-fic, 2/2) sandrine January 3 2015, 22:02:21 UTC

I'm so happy to hear that you thought so. Writing Caroline (and Klaroline!) was new to be, so I'm thrilled that she felt real. Thanks for the lovely comment. :)

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