Exhale...?

Jul 13, 2004 01:39

The trees brushing at the heavens lift my focus upward once more, and remind me that I can peek into time itself with naught but a passsing glance. With my gaze turned upward for the moment, it is clear that there are few things which can rival the beauty of the beyond. Brilliant waves of blue and green shimmer across the sky, their soothing rythym ( Read more... )

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mandatexheaven July 13 2004, 03:07:47 UTC
Ah, I could sit here and say the word beauty and then list some synonyms but it still would not be an adequate description.

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"It's beautiful and so are you..." - the beatles anonymous July 13 2004, 12:14:26 UTC
It's good, very good, but of course you already knew that, it's what I say every time. It's cause its true tho. You should write for national geographic or something.
Love,
Madona :)

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thoughts from Caitlin... anonymous July 13 2004, 13:08:04 UTC
This is yet another beautiful passage, Chris. Are you sure you're the same little goofball kid who used to pull my hair in the second grade? It sure doesn't seem like it's possible.

I love how this piece is freely formed. It's spontaneous without being interuppted and fragmented. Again, I commend you on your use of color.

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Awesome! anonymous July 13 2004, 13:24:33 UTC
Dude Chris! That was totally sexy! I love reading what you right. Its always great stuff.
--Karina

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Re: Awesome! anonymous July 13 2004, 13:27:34 UTC
haha im such a dork. i totally spelt the wrong write. I meant write haha not right. wow, oh yeah thanks bunches for last night. you really made me feel better. :)

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anonymous July 14 2004, 00:21:35 UTC
i love you.
end of story.

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