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Mar 18, 2010 13:31

Title: Lovers of the Night, Part 3
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: The boys don't belong to me, not even in vamp form.
Summary: Jeeves attempts to teach Bertie how to survive as a vampire.
Warnings: pretty graphic bloodiness and some rough sex
A/N: Thank you to thirstyrobot for the beta and the help with the setting. Love you, darling!

Part 3 )

my fic, jooster

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waqaychay March 18 2010, 21:20:39 UTC
i had to figure out some way to keep bertie innocent. ;D

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mxdp March 19 2010, 10:09:25 UTC
Oh dear what an "ending" to this story! I've told you before, there's no way I'll ever find a vampire book that will rise up to this standard...!

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waqaychay March 21 2010, 15:05:15 UTC
*lol* thank you, dear! but if you haven't read anne rice's vampire chronicles, i really suggest it. i've leaned pretty heavily on her here. read the first four or five books, anyway. the rest are a bit shit. ;)

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storyfan March 19 2010, 16:06:26 UTC
How you managed to keep them in character and still put them through this is more than I can understand. This sort of vampire story is right up there with Dracula and The Historian, both of which scared the shit out of me.

This is a vampire story, pure and simple. Those goofy Bella/Edward books have got people thinking, "Gee, aren't they beautiful and quite sweet? Look how she can visit a family of vampires and they don't even bite her."

Well, there's no such thing as a sweet vampire. Even Bertie does not make a sweet vampire. He might not be able to kill, but he sure doesn't mind taking what he needs from Jeeves.

Personally, I'd like to see a flying, naked Jeeves.

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waqaychay March 21 2010, 15:03:54 UTC
exactly! vampires aren't human. they aren't nice and friendly. they're monsters. there's a reason that people are afraid of them. and part of me wonders how long bertie really would keep his innocence. how long before the thirst overcomes his code?

and, you know, i wouldn't mind seeing a naked flying jeeves, either. ;D

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niektete March 19 2010, 18:34:58 UTC
Bertie being innocent even while vamped > anything.

LOVE!

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waqaychay March 21 2010, 14:57:47 UTC
*lol* ikr?! it took me a while to figure out how to do that. ;D

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crowson75 March 19 2010, 19:58:40 UTC
I have no idea how you manage to make this sexy even when it's violent and rather dirty. I mean that as a compliment. *fans self*

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waqaychay March 21 2010, 14:57:13 UTC
*lol* thank you, my love! ♥ ♥ ♥

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