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[warkitty]

“Then explain this” she answered, pulling down the collar of her shirt to expose a bruise darkening around the middle of her chest. “Explain how I managed to get a bruise here while sleeping in my bed

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[wlotusopenid]

It sounds like the characters are speaking for themselves, if the story is different from what you originally thought. I'm told that is a good thing. :-)