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colorfunk March 9 2013, 22:08:37 UTC
ahhh your oddball narrative voice and details are so fcking charming, the chankaisoo and the selu omfg. i also always want f(x) cameos in everything so ~thank you for those, but then the layhan at the end?? gawd you're the worst/actually best

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warmboys March 9 2013, 23:26:30 UTC
sob thought I'd get one last layhan in before I stop shipping them altogether on account of yixing's new hair ;;;; RIP

thanks a lot for your comment! I've been trying to experiment a little/step out of ze comfort zone ›_‹;;

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ookamino March 10 2013, 08:12:23 UTC
I confess I don't like this as much as Fighting Fish. (Probably due to my intense dislike of plastic surgery.) It was still a joy to read though. I love your characterization and sense of humor.

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warmboys March 10 2013, 15:14:04 UTC
hey, thanks for letting me know. I totally understand! FF is mostly character-driven, while this was more about playing with form and different voices, and every section ended before any real investment could happen. being able to bridge the gap would be the ultimate goal :)

thanks a lot for reading and your honesty. <3

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shirahimejj March 11 2013, 03:55:02 UTC
LayHan, LayHan, LayHan~

Love it!

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warmboys March 11 2013, 05:58:50 UTC
aw thanks :)!

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zvarrii March 14 2013, 09:53:27 UTC
all those hints of a breakup and xinglu never crossed my mind TTTT re-read the whole fic again and saw: “bound to break my heart” and “possibly a reincarnation of myself from another lifetime.” asdhjasdlhalhdsja and the whole phone convo i asdjhlajhsdla yes this is the best thank you for writing ;~; ♥ everything is so goooood *___* (esp kyungsoo(kai/chanyeol), but ig that's just the bias showing :3) i loved this u__u

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warmboys March 14 2013, 13:48:41 UTC
flkadj i'm really glad you liked it ;;; <3 lolol sorry for my fail ninja xingu!! sometimes i have stuff rolling around in my head and it doesn't quite translate to paper/keyboard XD;

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anonymous March 17 2013, 17:35:08 UTC
loved this!!

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warmboys March 18 2013, 03:27:21 UTC
Thanks a lot for reading!

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