omg i just finished re-reading these and that could-have-been-birthday-fic was so amazing. (also, i thought you said it stopped at 300 words? this is more than that lol) my gut twisted during that krishan confrontation - your writing is so effective in delivering that certain punch when it comes to idk, tension? conflict? without being over the top dramatic. this is one of the wip's that would forever hunt me for its potential and i would forever bug you! so be prepared! and that little bit with their mcm backpacks - idk it just feels so significant in their relationship? guhhh. i'm so bad with words but you already know how i feel about you and your writing, gull!!
p.s. that infidelity fic - how could you!!!! lol. also fat!yixing is so pervasive in your writing hahaha! it's like always there. either in the background or in the foreground.
i think i meant 3000 /_\ or maybe said that when it was stuck in the intro
cries :( krishan is following us everywhere
i really wanted to finish this, b/c i haven't written actual canon for them and as fun as AUs are, i think canon's a bit more interesting and challenging in a way and hurts that much more ughghhgh
omg honestly layhan operates in the same verse every time, in my head - highhan and fatxing forever and ever
reading these was an honor and a privilege, i'm basking in the holy light emanating from the last one, it is SO HARD for me to find layhan fic that actually feels like them to me but leave it to you to knock it out of the park
oh god no, the honor is all mine! that last one is the most recent of them, i was hoping to finish in time for his bday but nope ><; really terribly glad you liked this. they are hard to pin down :( thanks so much!
guhhhhhh x3 that last one is sf incredible, you write a great yixing and always always a great layhan (ditto anon above, how are u so goooood at instilling tension into familiarity), i read these last night and i'm still getting my head on right bc THE WAY YOU WRITE makes everything sting, the daily mundane shit stings, the absurd hilarious parts, i kept rereading the krishan cold war and wanting to curl up somewhere and smoke, it's that kind of like exposed feeling without any gloss, augh the way you communicate emotion dude
aw man now i'm embarrassed >< honestly i think most of what you feel owes to just how you feel about them, period, because fdaslkj THERE IS JUST SMTH ABOUT THEM idk :( even this comment makes me a little homesick for them
god can you imagine yixing /___\ and yixing shuffling fjlkdas and luhan massaging the grass lmao
wait ohmygod you have to finish the last one i just spent every sentence every minute EVERY SECOND of my reading that screaming out loud and pasting whole paragraphs in emails! I know disbandment fic is too early WHEN WE DON'T EVEN HAVE A COMEBACK but I am begging you please, all these wonderful details about their life after, Kyungsoo's potbelly, Tao blowing GD, Kris Kris Kris, that beautiful tension in the dorm, Minseok blinking sleepily, and your lovely Yixing narrative voice, like bathing in something warm and uncertain and resigned and hopeful all at the same time.
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p.s. that infidelity fic - how could you!!!! lol. also fat!yixing is so pervasive in your writing hahaha! it's like always there. either in the background or in the foreground.
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cries :( krishan is following us everywhere
i really wanted to finish this, b/c i haven't written actual canon for them and as fun as AUs are, i think canon's a bit more interesting and challenging in a way and hurts that much more ughghhgh
omg honestly layhan operates in the same verse every time, in my head - highhan and fatxing forever and ever
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also i love layhan rolling :( drugged cuties :((
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god can you imagine yixing /___\ and yixing shuffling fjlkdas and luhan massaging the grass lmao
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thank you for stopping by my dumpster <3
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