Fic: The Adventure of the Orange Kaiko [3/3]

[warriorbot]

Title: The Adventure of the Orange Kaiko [3/3]
Word Count ~2,500
Rating: G for "Goddamnit where's the smut?"
Pairing: John/Sherlock
Verse: BBC
Warnings: None
A/N: Give it up once more for filthgoblin. She betas beautifully. I made some changes that she suggested but hasn't seen - those will be the places where all the SPAGs are hiding.

(Part one)

(Part two)

Comments

[spiderine]

Great story! Thank you! Now, where can I get an Orange Kaiko? LOL!

[warriorbot]

We should go into business!

Merry Christmass

[filthgoblin]

So John's been playing with his Privates in secret, has he? *sniggers*

This turned out totally amazing, you know that? And the ending so touching. I'm off to read both yours and John's links now but the story hangs together beautifully. Brilliant :)

[warriorbot]

I hoped you might like that line *g* I just couldn't help myself.

Thank you so much for the beta-ing. *hugs you*

[filthgoblin]

Anytime. You know where I am *hugs back*

[cloudtrader]

Good stuff! I really enjoyed this.

[warriorbot]

Thank you!

[qthewetsprocket]

No John, we’re leaving aside the world of elaborate gangs and hackneyed stereotypes this time.

LOL! Ditto re: John trying so hard to be the audience proxy.

Very well done! The character voices and the humour were spot-on, plus the rl links are a very nice touch. I do hope you write more Sherlock fic; I really enjoyed this story.

[warriorbot]

I had to put in a little dig at BANK... :)

I am all out of bunnies at the moment - I'm sure the new year will inspire me.

[qthewetsprocket]

Cripes, have a few of mine...little buggers are scattered everywhere. *glances with woeful eyes upon my vast and undwindling "to write" list*

[lbmisscharlie]

Love this! Very well crafted and I love the details you've put into it - it's both serious as a case but kind of light and fun as a blog post from John. I can see them having quite a bit of fun going around with the toys trying to convince kids to trade!

Also, this line made me laugh so hard: No John, we’re leaving aside the world of elaborate gangs and hackneyed stereotypes this time. Oh, TBB, with your plotholes and outdated imperialist fears.

[warriorbot]

Thank you so much. Yeah - BANK needed a bit of a kicking didn't it?