There are a couple of fics from The Game is On that I never archived here.
Title: Ghost in the Machine
Challenge: Challenge three round one - "Minor Characters"
Rating: PG
Warning: Minor character death (though to be fair we never saw her alive). Spoilers for PINK
Betaed: by
filthgoblin who made it make sense.
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Ghost in the Machine )
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Challenge three round one - "Minor Characters" WINNER
Just in case anyone thought you were an ordinary, run-of-the-mill writer, which you most certainly are not.
I'd not read the second one but I loved it. Three very different perspectives that show different aspects of John's personality. It not only shows how good the series was at developing well-rounded characters but also how good an analyst and a writer you are to measure those angles and portray them with such eloquence and with such accurate voices, even in the third person.
Good work, you!
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You just like to see me get all hot and bothered don't you? Thank you for the lovely comments.
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You're always welcome, darling. I only say what I believe :)
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"Ghost in the Machine" is amazing.
and the three firsts are beautifully done, especially in sequence like that.
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