Hunter's Moon

[warriorofice]

Title: Hunter’s Moon

Description: The old ways come to light under the Hunter’s Moon.

A/N: Written for Day 4 of the 2012 Sailor Moon Halloween Extravaganza. A/Z, rated R to be safe for mature themes (although I think it’s not too explicit). My first Halloween fic!

Hunter’s Moon

Comments

[dreams_of_julie]

WOW! I'm still reeling!

[warriorofice]

Thank you! That's certainly one of the reactions I was going for :)

[rainbabie1]

Oh no, poor mom :(

[warriorofice]

Definitely. Thanks for reading!

[apsaraqueen]

ooh, ice, i really enjoyed this. the comparison - him thinking all along that he's the hunter, and in the end becoming the hunted - is beautifully drawn out here. he's really a good guy at heart, but juuust callous enough to go after a girl simply for the money. great characterization of the frequently complicated zoi, i think. the end is so unexpected - both for him and for the reader - it perfectly mirrors the narrative itself. and that last bit about the cherry pie? heartbreaking :(

oh, yes, and the usual regurgitation of amazing lines:

well-wrapped in her furs, trailing the subtle fragrance of her perfume

He can’t decide whether to shut his mouth or continue making mischief to provoke her into taking further disciplinary measures.

He admires the elegant curve of her neck, wishing he could run his lips along the spot where her hair lies blackly against her skin.

as if this is just a drop of water compared to the vast ocean of things that came between them in a past life

but she pushes it open as boldly as she pushes him onto

[warriorofice]

i've left this for much too long :( but THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

you hit the nail right on the head with zoi, and that makes me so, so happy.

but she pushes it open as boldly as she pushes him onto the bed - whoa, ami! :P
mwahaha. it's always the quiet ones.