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warriorofice

Santa Esperanza

Dec 02, 2011 14:27

Title: Santa Esperanza
Description: On three Christmas Eves, Zacarías de Santangel calls upon the powers of Santa Esperanza to make all his wishes come true.
A/N: For Advent Drabblender 2011, set in an AU world influenced by medieval Spain. I have no idea how it became a mini-fic-monster, but there we go... It evolved out of the fic I'm currently ( Read more... )

romance, action/adventure, advent drabblender '11, minako, ami, friendship, alternate universe, santa esperanza, zoisite

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warriorofice December 3 2011, 03:10:39 UTC

Thank you! So glad to hear the world is interesting and that you'd like to read more :) More of the (non-gory) details will come in the U/M-centric fic that should be finished in mid-December, and hopefully after that the fuller story.

satine86 December 2 2011, 23:47:00 UTC

I.Love.This.

There is something about the way you write that's so... lyrical? I don't know how to describe it... it's just lovely.

Magnífico!

(However I want to pester you for moar... WHAT HAPPENED IN BETWEEN!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!? WHAT OF THE OTHERS!??!??!?!?!?)

warriorofice December 3 2011, 03:17:52 UTC

Thank you for your kind comments! I'm very glad you liked the language and that it wasn't too over the top. :)

Haha, well, I have to figure out exactly what happened in between, but we will see more of the others -- Minako and Kunz, Mako and Neph, Jed, and Zoi again -- in the U/M fic that is in progress right now (besides U/M themselves, of course, who didn't appear too much here).

jenbunny December 3 2011, 06:51:49 UTC

oh my ^^ ... I really really loved this. I can not wait to see the story you are writing for me, this story has intrigued me from the start and I am looking forward to seeing much more of it ^^. I love the characters and well everything ^^

warriorofice December 5 2011, 00:05:16 UTC

Thank you for your kind words!! I am so relieved and happy to hear you liked it and are looking forward to seeing more :) Certainly the next fic will be U/M in nature and we will get to see what Mamoru is up to in this world. ^^

lovelylytton December 3 2011, 09:17:43 UTC

I... you... this...
Ice, this is... it's just...

*takes a deep breath*
wonderful, it's utterly wonderful, and I love this verse, and want more of this verse, and Zacharias and Joaquin and Casimiro and the cookies, and oh, this is so, so, so, so good!

warriorofice December 5 2011, 00:08:17 UTC

Thank you, Lytton!! I'm so glad you like this verse and the characters, and that Casimiro and his cookies are appreciated. He will be making more of an appearance in the fic to come on the 18 :) *crosses fingers for making deadline*

apsaraqueen December 4 2011, 01:36:49 UTC

*flails* the second i read the title, i KNEW i was going to love this - i'm all over medieval anything like white on rice. one thing that i noticed right away was that even though i didn't read your handy-dandy little key of names at the top, i still had no trouble figuring out who everyone was. i call that brilliant characterization ;D not to mention your amazing powers of description - you do such a great job of setting the scene, both here and in all your fics! really enjoying the flirtatious banter between the prim emilia and playful zacarias, and i also like how you've divided it into a three decade span, leaving a lot of mystery and intrigue for us to read between the lines. can i ask santa esperanza for more of this, please?

warriorofice December 5 2011, 00:14:05 UTC

thank you for all the awesome feedback :) i feel very accomplished to have gotten my first flail! and i am very happy to hear everyone was identifiable without the guide!! that is no mean feat since there were so many of them with long names introduced in one little fic. i think santa esperanza will have an affirmative answer for you on the 18th ;)