my newly written poetry comment and give opinions if you want

[wasteofskin]

As i gaze upon my wrists
the scars
like secrets with a twist
lay faded
jagged
But you insist
that they mean nothing
that they are
P
o
i
n
t
l
e
s
s
meaningless, like your love for me
these scars
are here to remind me
that when i needed you the most
you were not here
you were not near me
to save me
from
M
y
s
e
l
f

Comments

[xxcandyxlandxx]

interesting... everytime i look at mine.. i've always thought the same thing, just different words and yea

[_outsidethewall]

i like that a lot.

[misstechfive]

Very good.

[twiztidchick68]

I think your poem is lovely.
I've felt the same way before, but never had the words to spell it out quite like that.
=)

[_glittervomit]

That's... gorgeous.

And so true.