This was brilliant. The sections detailing with Jared's grief were...wow...way too real. I actually cried. With chin-quivering and big fat tears and everything. Not pretty.
As someone else said, you didn't overdo the melodrama and the story worked very well, kept simple. Thanks for sharing. This was heartbreakingly beautiful.
I have just read everyone elses comments and they have said exactly what I want to say only so much better than I could ever say.
This was an extremely well written, well paced story from start to finish. You gave just the right amount of backstory to let us know how much they both meant to each other, that gave us enough insight into how Jensen's 'death' affected Jared, how much grief he felt, I felt it too and that is down to your writing!
Tears were shed I have to say. I will definitely be reading this one again.
Awesome story. I devoured this one and got really cranky every time things like stupid sleep got in the way of my reading. It was such a creative plot and took the reader on a really great, though sometimes heartbreaking, story. Thanks so much!
Glad there was a happy ending although they both have a little way to go before they are over everything. I thought Mark had taken Jensen as he disappeared with Jensen. Great story I enjoyed it. Would be fun to read an update at some point of how things are going. Will Jensen propose etc.
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As someone else said, you didn't overdo the melodrama and the story worked very well, kept simple. Thanks for sharing. This was heartbreakingly beautiful.
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This was an extremely well written, well paced story from start to finish. You gave just the right amount of backstory to let us know how much they both meant to each other, that gave us enough insight into how Jensen's 'death' affected Jared, how much grief he felt, I felt it too and that is down to your writing!
Tears were shed I have to say. I will definitely be reading this one again.
One of the best BB of 2014.
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