Sanatorium;

[kibbumie]

 SHINee, 2min, pg. romance, angsty, and i think it has a bit of comedy. idek,
a/n: so yeah, I was writing an essay and this came to my mind, so i had to... um, yeah, but then i didn't know what to do with it so it took some time to finish, and i think you can tell where i stopped because it kind of got crappier ;~~~; i hope you like it anyway!  also

Comments

[chun_ji]

for me???

shaking & crying ;_______;
brb reading ♥♥♥

[chun_ji]

okay idk but this is really well-written and thought-provoking, you really captured the innocence of first love and yet there's an undercurrent of darkness, every word feels so heavy and meaningful. ngl when i read the title i thought it would be psychotic and stuff like your other fics but this is incredibly sweet. you're good at this fluff thing :')

Minho vaguely checked if he had his pants on, just to make sure the boy didn't think he was some kind of pervert
hahahah crying minho y r u such a dork 8DD

i thought the plot was really original, and you really weaved a sense of mystery from the beginning. like it was really light but i felt a hint of foreshadowing.

like those stubborn autumm breezes you couldn't touch, unapproachable

lullaby shaped clouds
SOBBING LULLABY SHAPED CLOUDS. brb quoting this phrase forever. so beautiful and lovely and all your metaphors are so refreshing and gorgeous, guhh. ;~;

you could call him a frog or a pole, but Choi Minho didn't like being called a cowardlmfaoo. this line sounds familiar, did you

lmfao i went over the comment limit

[chun_ji]

And Minho stared at him, with the world shading away, the rain, the light, everything was melting down. There was no fear this time, there was no time, there was no space. "Welcome back."

and sobs THE ENDING. so perfect and heartmending and thank you for giving them a happy ending ;~~; it's just amazing, the trials and tribulations they have been through that make their love so much more beautiful. and you wrote a totally lovely, realistic account of it. this is breathtaking as is all your work :) ♥♥♥

Re: lmfao i went over the comment limit

[kibbumie]

Oh my god how do I start to thank you ;----; your comment is so lovely sobs. thank you, i really appreciate it when you take the time to write such long comments akjikfs ♥ /hugs you

[vagui]

spot desu~~~

lol

[kibbumie]

get out B(

[vagui]

Lmao
Omg this is so amazing ;^; y estoy en el cel, así que mañana regreso que aquí me tardare mucho lol

[lemonmongler]

This was really beautiful!!!

[kibbumie]

aw thank you! i'm glad you think so ♥

[jinkibumiminho]

Lovely. Very creative.

[kibbumie]

Thank you! c:

[jasleonie]

"Minho hesitated before he lifted his arm, and he waited before Taemin's eyes announced it was fine. He touched his cheek, then, it was cold and soft, he wondered if Taemin was made of clouds because he felt like one. He placed his palm on the boy's round face and he closed his eyes, enjoying the warmth that was invading him," perfect, so perfect.

"Taemin opened his eyes then, staring at Minho's, and he placed his own hand over the older boy's. Taemin clutched it slowly, exploring the warm skin under his frozen fingers," I don't even know what to say ;___;

Gorgeous, gorgeous, utterly gorgeous /Mems forever ♥

[kibbumie]

Thank you so much for your words, ;~~~; i'm so glad you liked it and added it to your memories, you have no idea. ♥
thank you for reading!!