Devil's water pt. 2➫ English

May 18, 2011 21:48

SHINee, ontae, hinted!jongkey, PG-17, implied character death.
a/n: yep, here is the last part of it. It took me a while to finish because I completely forgot I had exams this week, and I had to finish some projects and "study", so i got to the point where i didn't know where things were going and I just wanted to get rid of it. but in the end, i ( Read more... )

lenght: chaptered, pairing: jonghyun/key, fandom: shinee, pairing: onew/taemin, warning: muerte de un personaje, Género: smut, género: suspenso/misterio, language: english, rating: nc-17

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vagui May 19 2011, 02:49:05 UTC
finalmente~

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vagui May 19 2011, 05:47:17 UTC
watwatwatwat

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vagui May 19 2011, 06:31:17 UTC
DON'T HIDEEEEEEEEEE GAHHHHHHHHHH ( ... )

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kibbumie May 20 2011, 01:54:46 UTC
lmao you cray person. fue tu burrito XD asdjkhdfoklñwe.,d omg stop it ;~; muchas gracias rfodjsdhpokñldl;ñlds
aunque sea crappy, tu opinión realmente me importa :'((( lmao more like, batshit!taemin & craycray!onew,
enserio no te diste cuenta sajhopfal okay, eso es bueno. eso es bueno B:
awuhopowlñk enserio gracias *_* tus comentarios son tan lindos sadjkhiofrkl me alegra que te haya gustado lo suficiente para agregarlo a memories orz #proud ILU bij ♥

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kibbumie May 20 2011, 02:05:09 UTC
te he, okay~

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gyustine May 20 2011, 15:37:38 UTC
Taemin become a murderer

But crazy...

Interesting

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kibbumie May 20 2011, 17:34:59 UTC
Thank you for reading! ♥

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jinkibumiminho May 20 2011, 17:28:57 UTC
I enjoyed this!
The smut scene was well done; evocative without being totally explicit. You did a good job of portraying Jinki's sensations (and lust) that verged on craziness.
Different and creative. Thanks for sharing!

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kibbumie May 20 2011, 17:40:23 UTC
I'm so glad you did! Thank you so much ;~;
i didn't want the smut to be explicit, either, because since i'm not really into writing it, i don't know, but i'm glad you think so!
nonono, thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥

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hitme May 24 2011, 03:18:12 UTC
U WHORE WHY DID MY JINKI GO CRAZY!!
and lol i totally saw it coming though, the way he always seemed on edge and just aklsdjaljd and his mind so worried. and ~the voices in his head~

u are sick in the head ok, but idk man i'd have sex w cray!taem too lmfao. and omg poor minho ;~~~~~; and jinki wtf ur in luv w a murderer!!! My fave scene was when bloody tae hugged bloody jinki and jinki said he still loved taem... SOB!!!

u made me bite my nails off, thanks B(
I hope u burn in hell.

Good fic bro, keep up the good work.

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kibbumie May 24 2011, 03:30:20 UTC
oh come on, crazy or not he is still a ball of cute. yay you noticed /o/

lmfao who wouldnt have sex with cray!taem sdjkhdsoilks i know i am sick stfu :(
you should've bitten your fingers off tho you're boring.

thank you ♥

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