In the Leyline of Fire (The Hollows, 1 of 7+)

[watch_yer_back]

Title:       In the Leyline of Fire
Author:    Wye (w.y.back)
Fandom:  The Hollows
Pairing:    Ivy/Rachel
Rating:    R to be safe
Spoilers:  Up to White Witch, Black Curse
Disclaimer:  Rachel, Ivy, Jenks and the rest of the Hollows belong to Kim Harrison and her publishers.  Only the story below is mine.
Author’s Note:   It’s a little late, but vampires

Comments

[ic1pher]

A very promising start. :)
Can't wait to see where this leads.

[watch_yer_back]

Thank you!

[exposedwords]

I love this so much. All the hard trues the banshee makes Rachel face, and how, even though she still holds on to denial, she's so loyal and fierce, especially when confronted with the possibility of Ivy and Jenks dying. It's very in-character.

Really well written too, I can't wait to read more :)

[watch_yer_back]

Thanks! I'm glad Rachel came across as in character, I was a little worried about that. I always thought the banshee was one of KH's most interesting creations (specially in that short story that features a younger, pre-Rachel Ivy), with that combination of ruthlessness and empath-type abilities. Very useful to a story. :)

[your_own_fate]

I love this so far!
I've been putting off reading WWBC since it came out but this fic has actually made me want to go read it right now.
Effectively written and entertaining. Thanks =]

[watch_yer_back]

Thank you! For all of its faults, WWBC has some nice Rachel/Ivy scenes. :)

[ultraily]

I really like the idea and where this is going.

I can't wait for an update!
:)

[watch_yer_back]

Thanks! An update should be ready in a few days. *crosses fingers*

[zearbear]

just loved this cant wait for more
and very well writen

[watch_yer_back]

Thanks! More in a few days. :)