In the Leyline of Fire (The Hollows, 2 of 7+)

[watch_yer_back]

Title:       In the Leyline of Fire (2 of 7+)
Author:    Wye (w.y.back)
Fandom:  The Hollows
Pairing:    Ivy/Rachel
Rating:    R to be safe
Spoilers:  Up to White Witch, Black Curse
Disclaimer:  Rachel, Ivy, Jenks and the rest of the Hollows belong to Kim Harrison and her publishers.  Only the story below is mine.
Author’s Note:   Thanks to everyone for

Comments

[exposedwords]

Oh yes, the wonders that snuggling with Ivy Tamwood does to your health. Should be a real treatment or something, I'd be sick all the time. So would be Rachel ;P

I love this, how Rachel gets so annoyed when Ivy lets go of her hand, and how she acknowledges that Ivy is hunting her and she's letting her. Really good :)

[watch_yer_back]

Snuggling with Ivy Tamwood as an approved course of treatment...oh I feel faint. ;)

Thanks! I enjoyed writing that too.

[exposedwords]

oh I feel faint. ;)

Funny, I haven't been feeling too well either since this treatment was suggested :P

good gosh

[writerwanabe]

Wow is all I can say. I am really liking this. I haven't had a chance to read WWBC yet but it does not matter. Loving the story, please keep it up.

w^2

Re: good gosh

[watch_yer_back]

Thank you! There are plenty of references to things that happened to WWBC though, hope I didn't spoil it for you.

[starbuckjr]

You know what i liked? It's how Ivy and Jenks came home just at the last minute. Instead of "some author-invented timing" you describe a logical set of events that explains it and doesn't leave anything left for me to question about your motives. It's this realization and connecting events that lack in fics.

Thank you. I'm looking forward to read the rest.

[watch_yer_back]

Hope that's not all you liked. :) But really, thanks for noticing. Once I wrote that Rachel was alone and Ivy and Jenks were on a run, I had to find a plausible reason to get them back in time.

[roarax]

No, no, no, no!
You can't stop it there?! How am I supposed to wait until the third chapter comes out before knowing what's going to happen when Ivy and Rachel share a bed?

But disregarding the insatable curiosity that's eating away at my insides due to lack of Ivy/Rachel, I have to say that this is some really awesome stuff. Amazing ideas and amazing style.
Keep it up :P

[watch_yer_back]

Amazing ideas and amazing style.

Whoo - thank you! Sorry about the wait, but I figured Ivy and Rachel sharing a bed deserved its own chapter. ;)

[ic1pher]

Loved it. You really had a knack for all the characters included, drawing a lot of canon from the books, while making it all seem plausible. Well done :)

[watch_yer_back]

Thanks! I was worried about getting the characters and the "flavor" of the story right so I'm glad that overall it's convincing. :)