Comments | watch_yer_back: In the Leyline of Fire, 3 of 7+

watch_yer_back

In the Leyline of Fire, 3 of 7+

Dec 06, 2009 13:04

Title: In the Leyline of Fire (3 of 7+)
Author: Wye (w.y.back)
Fandom: The Hollows
Pairing: Ivy/Rachel
Spoilers: Up to White Witch, Black Curse
Rating: R to be safe
Disclaimer: Rachel, Ivy, Jenks and the rest of the Hollows, including one paragraph quoted here from WWBC, belong to KH and her publishers. Only the story is mine.
A/N: One ( Read more... )

the hollows, ravy, rachel/ivy, femslash, fanfiction

Comments 24

kalxxel December 6 2009, 05:58:29 UTC

I'm pretty sure Rachael can not see in the dark. Quite certain.

But good story!!! I'm ecstatic for the update... and *sigh* about the ending. Looking forward toward the next installment. Also, loved the quote from WWBC. It's one of the scenes I remember most about the book.

watch_yer_back December 7 2009, 16:18:06 UTC

Thank you! You have no idea how relieved I am to hear that.

WWBC is one of the most frustrating Hollows books. It has scenes like that, it has Rachel and Ivy holding hands and going on about how much they care for each other, and then absolutely nothing happens!!! I really liked that scene because for once Ivy was very clear about what she was thinking and feeling.

A-Freaking-Mazing writerwanabe December 6 2009, 06:29:27 UTC

oh you had me so close there I thought FINALLY! but then they stopped. so sad.
sorta had me teary eyed for a moment there.
I feel for Ivy, I really really do...

Great fic
keep it up!

w^2

Re: A-Freaking-Mazing watch_yer_back December 7 2009, 16:30:10 UTC

Thanks, that means a lot! Sorry if it made you sad, but considering how those two are I just couldn't see them resolving everything in one night. If it makes you feel better, things will get better for Ivy.

Re: A-Freaking-Mazing writerwanabe December 8 2009, 01:56:03 UTC

I'm glad!
And dont be sorry it means that you are writing them very well, because a lot of their interactions in the books make me sad too.
And you are right they would not be able to get past all there mess in a single night. NopeNope.
But that does make me feel better.

lynders11 December 6 2009, 06:45:06 UTC

awesome. I love these two and you write them beautifully. Looking forward to the next installment. :)

watch_yer_back December 8 2009, 12:43:03 UTC

Thank you! :)

poppywillow December 6 2009, 12:08:44 UTC

I totally love this story!! I can`t wait to read more! I actually awwed out loud when I reached the end because I wanted to read more :P Loved it ♥

watch_yer_back December 8 2009, 12:47:20 UTC

So good to hear that, thanks! Working on providing more. :)

roarax December 6 2009, 18:48:38 UTC

Beautiful...I hate the fact that it's actually truthful to the books, and the way you eased into the kiss was excruciatingly slow...but totally worth it. I've been sitting on the edge of my seat for weeks waiting for the third part...and now we're startin' all over again for the fourth. CAN'T WAIT!

watch_yer_back December 11 2009, 16:00:15 UTC

As "mean" as it sounds, I'm glad something I wrote elicits that kind of edge-of-your-seat reaction. :D

"I hate the fact that it's actually truthful to the books, and the way you eased into the kiss was excruciatingly slow...but totally worth it"

Whew, at least it was worth it eh? I like playing with canon, taking something from where the books left off and twisting it to my own ends. ;) The books, as I've said before, are incredibly frustrating, and this is my way of dealing with that frustration.

Thanks for the wonderful feedback, and for being so patient!